he is the same as the other Greek gods i.e fucks women abondons his children it's disgusting . everyone hates Zeus because of this and you just made character similar to Zeus

novel 4,5 star but never seen a bullshit as big as the one in chapter 5 so less 1 star ---------------------------------------------------------------------

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Meh it’s an okay read .........................,..............................................................................................

Interesting but could be better. The olympians gods are turned into a joke. Inventing monopoly when there isn’t even proper currency. Cards games would have been much Where did he get the Marvel ores? What about the other pantheons? The way they went from 6 villages/towns/cities to 6 kingdoms is weird. They should have gotten 1 holy kingdom/empire and spread the faith to the surroundings countries and further. Where are the kingdoms located? What countries did they replace? With magic being taugh and encouraged, and their faith remaining strong, how did they fare against christianism/islamism? What about technology? What about the f*cking timeline of the world? The altered history? The reincarnated guy see the phoenix force in another new goddess and doesn’t question it. The reincarnated goddess knows that her father is a reincarnated guy and has no questions about it. It’s supposed to be a Percy Jackson fanfic, but there is barely any Percy Jackson and other demi-gods. When they finally appear, they barely got 1 chapter worth of screen time.

Hope you continue writing this.🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🎁🥺🥺😎🎁🎁🥺🥺🎁🥺🥺😍😍😍😍🥺🎁🎁🎁🎁🥺🥺🙏😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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