The synopsis and the initial chapters show some potential for a good book. It is a nice concept. I believe it wil be quite entertaining. However, work on some grammatical issues. Keep on working on your story.
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LIKEJust want to give you an honest review so you could improve your craft. Though, I don't claim I'm an expert. Just an avid reader and my personal perspective. I only wished that reviews were the true reflection of a book so it could serve as a guide if it needed to change something. Hope I was a help. Keep on writing.