Review Detail of Luzparadise_ in City of Vengeance

5 STARS!!!!! I love the long chapters, I can see that you did a great job narrating and describing what is happening, what is that... I know that you gave a lot of effort in just writing one chapters so kudos to you. This story is pretty interesting especially the title makes you want to read it to see what happens on it. You're an amazing writer, keep writing!