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who don't like system who have emotion this is not for you and if you don't like tsundere this don't even read it. system is tsundere so she is annoying. and again his first crush is kurenai who l don't think she will be his, l mean it is just like first love never will be yours. Has intelligence which can NOT be measured and gamers mind but still made a mistake. and he does do things just to not to change the plot. that is one of the reason why kurenai got killed. l mean you have intelligence that superb and you could not even figured out that danzo will not do anything to you or your loved ones. l mean seriously. author your story is good but you have think more carefully what you want to write.
Ultimate Reincarnation : Naruto ( hiatus)
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I just started writing this fanfic for my own satisfaction . I was getting bored during covid . And in each fan fic . mc just magically starts fking every girl he can find . I Don't want this although he will eventually have harem of sort . Let's just say kurenai helped him and you don't ra*e person who helped you if she wants no problem he can fk , but I don't wanna , in every fanfic out there mc just fk the girl without any consideration . Like rules are made to be broken , abilities also not function properly some time , not a big thing . high intelligence doesn't mean he will get dreams of every action of every person , It means whatever he focuses his mind on he will do it in no time . It is just for fun . if wanna see a professional fan fic . I m sorry I can't provide that . Once again I'm saying it's just for fun . Don't use to much mind , and just laugh .
you should have written that in the summary that you are writing just for fun. l wouldn't have pointed out mistake to make it better. well there is nothing to do. peace out
Damn_Salty:I just started writing this fanfic for my own satisfaction . I was getting bored during covid . And in each fan fic . mc just magically starts fking every girl he can find . I Don't want this although he will eventually have harem of sort . Let's just say kurenai helped him and you don't ra*e person who helped you if she wants no problem he can fk , but I don't wanna , in every fanfic out there mc just fk the girl without any consideration . Like rules are made to be broken , abilities also not function properly some time , not a big thing . high intelligence doesn't mean he will get dreams of every action of every person , It means whatever he focuses his mind on he will do it in no time . It is just for fun . if wanna see a professional fan fic . I m sorry I can't provide that . Once again I'm saying it's just for fun . Don't use to much mind , and just laugh .