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priyabolagani
priyabolaganiLv134yr
2020-12-16 15:58

Hi, The story is great. the plot lines are good. It's a plot with a great future. Every scene is intriguing. The first chapter itself makes us to dig more into the story. all the best author.

Became The Secret Mob: Limei's Twist of Love [Closed]

isharislynkia
4.8
41 Chs

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Bloom759
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Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the strong female lead, I do love your writing style and love the fact you try your best to keep us updated on this wonderful story. I personally love Fantasy and ofcourse Romance novels! Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.

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_ArchKingLynis_
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Very profound and well detailed. Author has managed to put together a very promising story. In terms of describing the place, the character, the event, very well made.

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Ritankar_Sarkar_
Ritankar_Sarkar_Lv10

Story has great potential as it can be judged by the writer's mature explaination skills,story is damn expressive from the start.. story development needs some attention. Updating stablity is okay for the initation,whilst maintaining the pace of the story! BUT, Believe me you will be loving it,once you get indulged in the story![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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The_Aegis
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Just from the first chapter I can tell there’s a lot of care and time put in the book, not only that but it has few to no mistakes in grammar or spelling, punctuation could be a bit better but other than that the world ties together well, characters are developed nicely. I’d say 5 stars.

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CHArgergirl
CHArgergirlLv12

really like the story. hope author will continuously update it. looking forward to it.πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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Decree_Woods
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Everything was great the grammar the transition and i love how expressive and descriptive your writing style are which is pretty and gives you more understanding on what's happening. I like strong female leads it's just gives off that one shouldn't underestimate them. First chap gave me a very mysterious feeling which is great. It makes me to know more where the story would progress, It got me totally hooked. I've added it to my libraby waiting for more. Keep up the great wrok. Edit: Wish i could write like you Hehe [img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

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Snowfel
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Ohh my God..... Just lovely the story in terms of the plot so far 10/10 grammar 9.9/10 everything done perfectly I'll definitely be keeping up with this.... Last but not least I looooove how descriptive you are I could vividly imagine everything that was described..... This is a great story.... I love cultivation story that made it even better honesty 20/10 would read again

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