No matter what happen please make Pyrrha Nikos pair up with the MC cause i am sick at Jaune and her! also keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK!

Shameless author review. Ray is the twin brother if Ruby Rose and a reincarnated soldier from Earth. He is a hardworking genius with a mischievous side that doesn't trust Ozpin and builds his own power base to act as the third party in Ozpin and Salem's centuries long conflict with the intention of finally bringing it to an end no matter the cost. But how will the unexpected appearance of the Grimm Lords affect his, Ozpin, and Salem's plans for Remnant? This is only the first book in a series I have planned through multiple worlds including Pokemon, Star Wars, and my own original cultivation world. I hope everyone will enjoy this ride along with me.

Nice to know that even on this cancerous platform, you can still find some mighty fine RWBY fanfics. I am honestly excited about what you have in store. P.S. Can we please pretend that Arkos isn't a thing and add Pyrrha to the harem? (¬_¬ )

This author took way too much inspiration (read copy pasta) from the fanfiction "RWBY: Twins of the rose". 0 originality until now except the prologue...

Solo un par de cosas que decir en cuanto a que si bien se que es un fic el echo que pongas un grim con personalidad de joven maestro abofeteado le quita la esencia a la historia para empesar se supone que los grim no deven sentir dolor, miedo te lo consedo pero lo demas.... ya parece wuxia sin contar el echo de que se puso algo como susanoo que no se podria con el concepto de aura si fuera ki lo entenderia o algo como un domo de aura pero susanoo un poco mucho. Solo eso mi queja es porque empeso muy bien pero creo que se desbia demaciado para considerarlo fanfic a demas de lo lineal de la historia yo lo dejo pero creo que mi calificacion es justa.

You should def make a harem page and update it with every new entry And i swear to god keep yang, Ruby, Blake and pyra away from Jaune They have to go to mc

Solo tenía que emparejar a Pyrrha con Jaune... ¶~~~^~^~^^~^~^~~^~^~^~^~~^~^~~~^~^~~^^~^~^~^~^~^~^^~^~^~^~^~~~~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~~^~^~^~^~^~^~~^^~~^~^~~~~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~~^~~^~^~^~^~~^~^~^~^~~^~^~^~^~^~~^~~^~^~~^~^~^~^~~^~~^~

great fanfic, please continue with your great work............................................................................................................................................

It has been so long since I've found a good RWBY fanfiction! Great job author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Very good mister Tu historia tiene mucho potencial puedo ver facilmente mas de 500 capitulos si lo alargas y lo haces bien con relleno,citas y NSFW junto con escenas lemmon y smut con separacion de una chica cada vez