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emashes195
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I really like your story.The world background and the lore is really interesting and the mystery is alright too. But just one problem i have. As of now im at chapter 178. And recently the MC is becoming less and less likeable. He is someone who stole a class that isnt supposed to be his. His actions brought in a lot of consequences resulting in billions of lives being at stake, and he knows it. But our MC who is supposed to be a humble dude keep running away from his responsabilities. And he justifies it with "i have free will". Yep you have free will. But when you nake a choice, you gotta deal with the consequences that come with it. Also what is his deal with him and killing people? Just because they know your identity he is gonna kill everybody, even though not all of them are hostile to you? Dude is supposed to be humble even though he is 24/7 being an as* and being rude to people. Really want to read your book, but if i dont like the MC, it really put off my reading enjoyement, wich is a pity because like i said your book is really good.

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Plamler
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It turns into this? That is sad af. Why would the author make this worldly and humble MC that talks about how much of a shame it is that other People are not helping putThe struggles of the destitute, just to turn him into some ruthless secretive hypocrite.