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Review Detail of HintermeierChristi in The Ancients World

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The backround story isn´t bad I hope later it answered why the MC was able to get back in time. And the MC is likeable but I wonder why when his family is so much worth to him why he doesn´t talk to his sister. Bad points are : - The author makes the MC with quest rewards so OP but then scale the opponent in his level range up so that the MC has to take effort to kill them. He totally forgot what this would mean if other players would to fight against such opponents. - You could forget at minimum one digit in all stats, hp etc. -To often are the stats of the MC postet and the fights mostly are damage report.

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The Ancients World

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This is an accurate observation of bad qualities in my novel. Addressed in a respectful way, thanks for the review.