Review Detail of ominouslyomenix in The Highstar Trilogy

Very interesting story. Well written, detailed but doesn’t overshare, and very immersive. It avoids white room syndrome and the world building is well done. Introducing the characters is also not forced and done smoothly without seeming awkward. The elements fit in with each other and create a well written story. Some of the chapters are quite long though, and it can cause you to lose your attention span. I’d recommend cutting the chapters down and seperating the scenes so it doesn’t seem climped together.