This is one of those supposed genius badass MC, but in reality is actually a moronic loser. Dude keeps talking out loud to his system (in front of everybody) and recklessly test his powers (mofo demolished an entire inn, just to test his timestop magic, and he was like "meh") without a care for any consequences. He also decided to tell the first girl he met, EVERYTHING about him, after he was done raping her. Now before anyone starts frothing at the mouth, at my accusation, let's give some context. MC received some hidden skills from god, one of which is a pheromone based aphrodisiac. MC didn't realize this until it already affected the receptionist of the inn he was staying. MC ask the system to elaborate upon the skill, system stated that only way to alleviate the lust it to either, have *** with the MC, or let the lust fade away after a while (24hrs). Now this is where the rapey part comes in; Rather than be respectable human being and just keep his distance and let the effect fade away, MC made like a creep and had his way with the poor girl. Anyways, the only good thing about this story is the author. He at least admits his inexperience, and is receptive to criticism, so there's a high chance of improvement. But until then, this work is trash.
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LIKElol back then I already warned the author about mc IQ...I have not read it but the reviews says everything...already told the author to go with the same IQ....i guess he will learn from his mistake....maybe
Whtvr:I knew it. When author saying MC has high IQ then he should be a retarded MC. So many novels are like that, High IQ but dumb
High IQ = Other people are dumb. Whatever suspicious the mc does, even in broad daylight, people will not think of it as suspicious
Whtvr:I knew it. When author saying MC has high IQ then he should be a retarded MC. So many novels are like that, High IQ but dumb
Doesn't change the fact that the MC is a moron, someone who makes mistakes that only an undeniably stupid person would make. The fact that he's supposed to be an academic genius and army veteran, yet acts like an impetuous manchild, only serves to further aggravate the issue.
David_Drake:High IQ is subjective.
Never said you were wrong bruh. I can't even get past the first chapter before the MC pulls a high IQ move
MoldyGuacamole:Doesn't change the fact that the MC is a moron, someone who makes mistakes that only an undeniably stupid person would make. The fact that he's supposed to be an academic genius and army veteran, yet acts like an impetuous manchild, only serves to further aggravate the issue.
David_Drake:Never said you were wrong bruh. I can't even get past the first chapter before the MC pulls a high IQ move
MoldyGuacamole:Doesn't change the fact that the MC is a moron, someone who makes mistakes that only an undeniably stupid person would make. The fact that he's supposed to be an academic genius and army veteran, yet acts like an impetuous manchild, only serves to further aggravate the issue.