Review Detail of DanTheMotivatedMan in After the Fall MARS Edition

Item: After the Fall MARS Edition
Rating: 3.8

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DanTheMotivatedManLv13yrDanTheMotivatedMan

A decent first chapter all around, although I will say I thought it was a bit too short, so I would recommend trying to increase your word count for future chapters. I'm sure Marigold and her team will turn out to be interesting characters!

After the Fall MARS Edition

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Thanks so much the reasoning behind the short chapter was because o was really excited to release something so I kinda made it like prelude but thank you so much for reading it. Can't wait to get more out there for you.

3yr