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Masterofall1
Masterofall1Lv143yr
2021-08-21 03:02

The writing quality is okay. Updates are Meh, seeing as this is scheduled for a rewrite. Story Development: Now this is honest to god, the most frustrating story development I've seen in an FF, How is the MC suppose to do any kind of story development and or character development if he keeps getting chased out and beaten down and EVERY SINGLE UNIVERSE HE TRAVELS TO, HOW IS THE ROD/ROB allowed to due that to a mortal without other ENTITIES GETTING MAD AT HIM???? THE ROB IS LITERALLY MESSING WITH THE REALITIES/CHARACTERS OF THAT UNIVERSE / MULTIVERSE OF OMNIPOTENT BEINGS?? DOES THE PRESENCE NO LONGER HAVE ANY PRESENCE IN DC OR DOES THE ONE ABOVE ALL NOT HAVE ANY SAY IN MARVEL? HOW WOULD FATE & ROD/ROB be able to due anything WITH THOSE TWO SAFEGUARDING THEIR Multiverses in the omniverse? World Background: Ties into my point about character design and story development

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Saintbarbido
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I really like that you got so frustrated 😂. Shows that I gotta bring that rewrite pronto

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Jasonenrick
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I don't know what you guys think but I always rate Books on Webnovel more subjective than Objective, if you have a problem with that, f_uck off! Writing Quality 5-Stars Story Development 3-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 1-Star Writing Quality[WQ]: First of all, there is not much to say about this one, it's good! Not great but good nonetheless and it's Webnovel so we * the readers * don't expect a masterpiece! Story Development[SD]: Personally, I don't like it! But it certainly isn't bad; in an Objective perspective! The Story doesn't develop too slow and not too fast either for my liking. What gets on my nerve is the way it is going and with it I mean the end Goal; if there even is one! Character Design[CD]: First and foremost, the Mc doesn't have a backbone and probably won't ever have one. The author tries to make/describe/write the Mc a bit dominant and powerful but honestly fails miserly with it. Updating Stability[US]: I think it was one chapter a day till yet and that's good so there isn't anything to explain to this topic. World Background[WB]: What you * the reader * realizes very soon and fast is that the author adds characters to Universes and alters them so that his Story doesn't get boring and to keep the reader interessted, which in my opinion isn't a bad thing; but the author fails yet again( In my opinion ). The Mc seems not to be able to get any more powerful because the author always adds things and characters so that the Mc won't ever be a bit overpowered but more like above the norm or above average. This results in the Mc being looked down upon and being played with by his enemies; read the Novel/Book to know what I mean. All in all, it's a good read but not one I would continue to read or support because it isn't my style. And don't get me wrong, I have read Novels where the Mc is like glass and gets killed by nearly everything or Novels where the Mc is a little kid for the whole Novel and won't ever get powerful or overbearing. Anyways, that's my review and how I view the Novel! Bye, lovely holidays, and don't go out, or Corona will get you!

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