The writing quality is okay. Updates are Meh, seeing as this is scheduled for a rewrite. Story Development: Now this is honest to god, the most frustrating story development I've seen in an FF, How is the MC suppose to do any kind of story development and or character development if he keeps getting chased out and beaten down and EVERY SINGLE UNIVERSE HE TRAVELS TO, HOW IS THE ROD/ROB allowed to due that to a mortal without other ENTITIES GETTING MAD AT HIM???? THE ROB IS LITERALLY MESSING WITH THE REALITIES/CHARACTERS OF THAT UNIVERSE / MULTIVERSE OF OMNIPOTENT BEINGS?? DOES THE PRESENCE NO LONGER HAVE ANY PRESENCE IN DC OR DOES THE ONE ABOVE ALL NOT HAVE ANY SAY IN MARVEL? HOW WOULD FATE & ROD/ROB be able to due anything WITH THOSE TWO SAFEGUARDING THEIR Multiverses in the omniverse? World Background: Ties into my point about character design and story development
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