Review Detail of Imnyu in Military System god realm revolution

I don't really get why the reviewers on the book says its unreadable or maybe because ive read many Google translated novels straight out of raws that my capabilities to read and understand book has numb my preference in translation . -so the writing quality is average for me nothing stands out in the translation not that it gives me headaches trying to read it or anything - the story development for me is so very fast it gives little to no room to breathe always having enemies to defeat one after another, i was thinking why does the story have to force it to become dependent on the military cant the people cultivate ive read that some of his officers cultivate since one time an officer enter the shadow of mc however why don't they have cultivation and the military system fuse to strengthen the army very big plot hole and the mc already have top cultivation arts at his sleeves but the author forces mc to have some excuse so that he can't cultivate the first cultivation art he got was very fine the biography clearly mentioned that the one who cultivated the art just got defeated because she was besieged/ambush and was only seriously injured not dead so it means that the devour martial art was very powerful i think it was the top martial art of the whole world the author doesn't expand much upon it but said one of the top but the drawback that the power of many people that the devour martial art absorbs doesn't mix well then how does the previous owner not just die upon cultivating it and become very powerful on top of that and the second martial arts was the martial arts of the guardian which was the strongest cultivator on yhe world im sure we as the audience wouldn't want to have a castrated mc although powerful so the author makes the mc have an excuse to not cultivate the second martial arts as to not become castrated however another thing the mc stated that mc wants to cultivate to the point he would risk his life to jump on a cliff so im sure the mc would cultivate the devour martial art straight away even though was warned a little about the drawbacks and the devour martial arts should have something mentioned as to how mix/fuse/balance the absorb/devoured power since the martial art is top martial arts and why doesn't the mc focuse on researching the martial artists powers, martial arts, the body of of martial arts, body of beasts, body of demons how does the demons cultivate, bloodlines and many special materials like spirit plants , spirit materials/metals analyze them using super computer and AI and im sure the super computer has higher computing power than the martial artists it should be able to analyze and create many things not just analyze the boat and make a shield of it using electricity