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InHisName
InHisNameLv63yrInHisName

Extremely - EXTREMELY - difficult to read! It took immense effort just to decipher the sentences. I had hoped the story would improve over time, but it unfortunately didn't. The first chapter was hideous, the second showed improvement, but then after the third, quality dipped to all-time-low again. Let's forget about writing quality for a moment and address the elephant in the room: story development and character design. The protagonist so far has 0 (yes zero!) personality. We don't know anything about him apart from the one tiny little detail that he's a transmigrator from our Earth. You would think after this abysmal display of character design things can't possibly get any worse! But no! Somehow it does. The protagonist in a display of absolute genius decides to reform the government to not only have a constitution, but a constitution which directly limits the Emperor's (the MCs) power. Transforming the absolute monarchy into, you guessed it, a constitutional monarchy. This author is clearly either completely ignorant about historical social evolution, or worse...a liberal snowflake.

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Military System god realm revolution

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Zenithlr
ZenithlrLv4Zenithlr

MTL be like.

Crescent
CrescentLv11Crescent

MTL be like 2.0* 👍

Daoist4tEl7w
Daoist4tEl7wLv2Daoist4tEl7w

I mean it improved a little bit, but it's still the same quality, the story and plot are good, the grammar is the only downside.