i LOVE YOUR PERSPECTIVE ON THIS, THE SYNOPSIS LURES READERS RIGHT IN,DOESNT IT? apart from that the MC is very strong, pro tip, introduce the concept of flaws and it'll help with the character development! love this! a few grammatical errors here and there but its okay, happens to the best of people, an over all OOOO0
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