Extremely repetitive writing. Half of the paragraphs just reword previous paragraphs (e.g. "He was nervous because it was his first time." "Because it was his first time, he was anxious." and a handful of other rephrasings...some one right after the other). Then the author uses A LOT of extra unnecessary descriptions for movement. It feels like he says, "He turned his body, lifted up his arm, extended his fist, and pointed at the object with his index finger," instead of just saying, "He pointed at the object." It feels like 50% of the chapters could be erased with zero clarity lost...in fact it would increase clarity. Characters are one dimensional and boring. Barely any MEANINGFUL world background or description. Especially bad since the author seems to randomly use four different ranking systems terms for monster strength with no rhyme nor reason (stage, level, star, and rank).
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