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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv12yrCarlos_Balbizan

4 stars to encourage, but it's really hard to read... the author can't differentiate her from him in the sentences (now I'm thinking clarke is futa). things happen just like the story and he only interferes at the last moment... and what has to do with not being questioned? the more a person likes you the more worried they would be, a lot of nonsense. it seems that the author was watching the series and somehow adding MC in the middle, almost without changing anything (then it changes a little, but at first it is like this)... but I give a discount for being at the beginning, and please... . try to use grammarly

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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

doesn't it make sense for a fiercely supplied character with an octavia to ask to share the MC with mine ?? ... unless polygamy was something useful in the ark (which is actually quite difficult, but not impossible)

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

without Hope I lose faith in this novel, pfv include her

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

writing needs serious improvement, but reading fast until you can read

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

man, why do all your fanfics start medium and get worse throughout the chapters?