I really like the concept behind this, I hope that it doesn't go the route of giving the mc so many abilities they dont even know what to do with them but it's doing good so far. plus 20 chapters in only a few days I cant ask for more. just a few times where there are some inconsistencies like 1 paragraph later or even in the same paragraph which is slightly confusing, so maybe just look over it once if you dont already.
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