It's character design and development turned me off this story. Like some guy in the review section said. It's too short, it's like a summary of a novel. Its not suited for harem books. The characters are one dimensional. From what author wrote, this harem is gonna be pretty big. I think it will ruin the story because of the sheer amount of partners, they may be forgotten and remember again and again. Even if the heroines have and equal focus, we would get sick of the story not progressing. Also your writing quality is good. Peace Out
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