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Kirbi_Doty
Kirbi_DotyLv103yr
2021-10-03 15:09

Don't waste your money, the whole book is just the same scenes repeating over and over again then when you think something is finally going to happen it just stops. There is a lot of potential here but it just doesn't go anywhere then flops.

Hated By My Mate

Nathalie Hooker
3.9
36 Chs

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Patricia_Smith_1049
Patricia_Smith_1049Lv10

This book is so interesting that i can not seem to put the book down. I would love to read more wish for book number two to come out.Will there be a book 2 or more.

3yr

DaoisttvqR6V
DaoisttvqR6VLv10

Well written story and characters but it needs to be contitnued, it can't be unfinished like this...unsatisfied with the end which is not end at all. seems like cut off scene. I ask the author to write more, it is worth to continue. And Maximus' attempts are touching. could he have the chance...just a suggestion:))

3yr
Ashley_Wright_2056
Ashley_Wright_2056Lv13

WARNING ⚠️ DO NOT READ THIS BOOK UNLESS YOU WANNA BE DISAPPOINTED! IT JUST ENDS. NOTHING NADDA NOPE ZILCH. FANTASTIC READ UNTIL IT LITERALLY LEAVES YOU HANGING!!!

2yr
DaoistaBRAqo
DaoistaBRAqoLv1

INCOMPLETE novel. webnovel marked ot as complete but you realize that on chapter 36 it ends it a flop, you need to pay for the first 36 chapters again in a different app to read the 37th....

3yr
Sharee_Johnston
Sharee_JohnstonLv15

I really enjoyed reading this book. It truly was a very heartfelt & emotional story. Aurora was put through a tremendous amount of heartbreak & misery by her mate. I thought this was so cruel. But realise the intention by the author was to show that no matter what anyone believes, if you stay true to yourself you are stronger than anyone & truly worthy. Looks & stature do not matter - it is what is inside.

3yr
Victoria_Murray_1491
Victoria_Murray_1491Lv11

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Peace_War
Peace_WarLv12

A good read. Could not stop reading till the end. Autora had enough. She made the correct decision. But knowing wolfie's character, dont think he will allow it. Is the sequel up? May I have the name of book 2?

2yr
Melanie_Gray_7443
Melanie_Gray_7443Lv10

This is not a complete story and it hasn't been updated in over a year! Pull this book! The story itself is good... but without it being finished or updated what is the point?

2yr
Kim_Dye
Kim_DyeLv11

This book should not be listed as completed or at the very least should be a part 1. Your readers don’t deserve to be left with so many hanging ends to the plot. Very disappointing.

2yr
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