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2021-02-07 06:30

Dude I would Kiss u if i could but good story my dude <3 <3 <3< <3< <3 3 3<<3<<3 <3 <3 <3 3< 3< <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 3< 3< 3< 3<3 <3 3< [img=recommend][img=update]

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dozkiller07
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the thing that I love about your story is how real your charecter is to me.He is rational human.he have defenetly a good brain too. everyone one says he is like younger brother of yami.but disagree.i have only read 2 fanfic of yours and from the beggining till end I have seen how different both charecters are. Yami is a good killer from the beginning.he is your bad ass dude.but denki is diffrent.i see he is more human,he acts badass but he isnt.he acts strong but he isn't.he acts calm but he isnt.yami is mostly same for the last 70 chapters.but for denki? I see he improves in each chapters. Yami has an easy life.yeah he is Naruto but he has a golden finger.but denki need to work really hard.i can see or rather feel the difference.i feel empathic towards denki.thats prove how good you are with charecter design plus not using a harem in modern japan is really good thing.coming from a harem loving guy.i love harem but at the same time I love story that follows the rules that story set for itself.i love harem in cultivation novel or dxd.but it's not fun in modern japan.like I said staying true to the rule.really good work. if anyone like a manipulative mc who things he is cd hearted and do cold hearted things but still have that human said that shows now and then.the .this is the story for u. many said this is "holyjokers novel.so mc is evil and manipulative" which is plain stupid for me.from the hinds authors shown throughout this 40 chapters,mc is no where near a bad guy.infact he is so focused in surviving and acting hero that he started to become more heroic and daring then a manipulative and strategic person. I may be wrong may be those who said holyjoker is only about manipulation and evil may be right.but I thing every charecter of his has a special perks specific to them.

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