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Review Detail of Ultivexla in Doomsday Bunker Upgrade

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If I could give 'Story Development' 0 stars I would. The story is about what a character does when an asteroid hits earth. The author spends each chapter reminding me that the asteroid is hitting earth while not adding anything of substance to the plot. The chapters are short and with half of every chapter being used to reiterate the fact that the meteorite is landing on earth, then 1/4 of the remaining being used as a nationalism plot drive, only 1/4 of the chapter provides new information. The items acquired by the MC are mentioned in passing but provides no context the environment. The explanations given are useless given the face that the world building wasn't even attempted. I felt as if I could get a more interesting story development from a physics textbook and although reading might be a waste of time as a hobby. I regretted reading this book. It's a shame since the plot was actually interesting but the execution was flawed. Pros : system (still hasn't appeared) Positive comment : the initial plot might be useful as a movie (without the nationalism)

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