Review Detail of Quade_Ong in Code A: You're My Mission

I'm in the second chapter so far, but I am liking it so far. There's a clear setup and the character has a distinct personality right away and sticks in your head. The style is also really good and kinda charming which helps keep you invested. My only criticism is that it could use a bit more polishing to fix some grammatical mistakes and to give some extra context of what is happening.