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Whit3Tig3R
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MC was enjoyable until she started deathmatches between orphans of her own kingdom and I'm dropping this after chapter 110 where she decides to do same kind of deathmatch for slaves that essentially become slaves because MC's own incompetence of running the kingdom. Overall average read, liked the world/plane, thou the status sheet coulda been presented more compact instead of used to meet character amount criteria every other chapter or almost every chapter

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nice, I went to Caterpillar from this. I'm around chapter 100'ish, there's couple of things that makes me frown but way less so then here. Ugh if I had to make it short and concise without being a paragraph Andy, MC is petulant, incompetent, arrogant sadist. Paragraph Andy mode ENGAGE, spoilers ahead. Orphans were just there when she rushed the kingdom, she gathered em up made a deathmatch, and used the survivors for here assassin corps Like ffs make an orphanage and then take some for your squads(like Danzo, if you're familiar) Her own people became slaves, well because there isn't any policing force in her kingdom, just military training and sitting on walls of the kingdom. So naturally her kingdom festered with thugs and hoodlums, who enslaved civilians, and again deathmatches for slaves just because "they're ALL broken, you can't fix em" yet they're not broken enough to make another assassin corps. Same story as orphans, just make a monastery for them to slowly heal, then pick and train some for your assassins. I checked into latter chapters and MC doesn't grow or devolve as a person/monster at all, all character growth is inconsistent. One example, she's becoming more and more sadistic, later on she gets rammed and deepthroat'd by 2 girls with strap-ons and lets her self be treated like a slave. Overall it's just not for me.

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