Review Detail of LukeInDC in Arpious of the Planes

90% of this book is filler. The author uses the last paragraph of each chapter as the first paragraph of the next chapter. Plus the MC is always checking their status and by chapter 100, the status of the MC is nearly a full chapter. I know they are only doing it to hit the word count but I’m tired of paying for two paragraphs of story with the rest of the chapter filled with the status checks by the MC. Chapter 380-381 are especiallly bad. And then there is the repetitive BSDM porn chapters that add nothing to the story. At least the author admits it up front with a disclaimer before the R18+ sections. I’m thoroughly disappointed. The book started out well and then rapidly went downhill