Review Detail of UndeadBeing in The Game Rune System
Review detail
Congrats Author you have made a mc so unlikable that I like seeing him weak... you have created something worthwhile to enjoy reading, of course only the weak parts but if you want my honest opinion he's an egotistical hypocrite who thinks everything is his. Not something i'd recommend you to read, the characters are somewhat good except the mc but it's so bad I had to give character design a 1 star. Back to my ratings 5 for writing quality because you know how to make a story work. 3 for stability of updates because i haven't been here long enough. 4 for story development, again a great author. 1 for character design MC. 4 for world background, it was portrayed greatly yet the characters refer weirdly to it. Best of luck author!
The Game Rune System
Sixth
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I plan to keep at it man, although my review sounds rude i respect your story, you got everything right except the mc but just the story alone deserves a 5 star. Hating the mc might just be my thing and I respect others opinions. I'm also going to read more of your work and i might come back when there's more chapters just keep honing in and you'll get it, you have the skills and I hope the best
Sixth:Haha! A lot of people hate Tetsuya! Unfortunately, I failed in this aspect! Thanks for trying out the story! Check out 'I will be The Monkey God' please ^^