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Review Detail of Ashmodai in I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)

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Ashmodai
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The author doesn't even research the character he is using as his MC. Apparently Voldemort was born with red eyes, which is just dumb he had green eyes that became red through rituals after he was in Hogwarts. And the author seriously believes Tom is short for Thomas. If he can't even get the name right the actual story can't be anything good.

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I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)

AlienWarlord

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Ashmodai
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I have no interest to further discuss with a mentally disabled person like you. Reddish or pink isn't red. And Tom Riddle wasn't born with red eyes cause people aren't born with red eyes or something close if they don't have albinism. If you cant accept my review not my problem it still has the most likes.

RoyalMink:see what I mean about the bunched panties? can't say I wasn't bored when I replied, but you who is so negative and toxic must have a reason to be so, right? also "In some cases, the iris (the colored part of the eye) has very little color so a person's eyes might look pink or reddish. This is caused by the blood vessels inside the eye showing through the iris."
AlienWarlord
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Its a fan-fiction. Dont take things to seriously and just enjoy it. Im not writing Voldemorts Biography. God, people just pick any minor thing to complain about, dont they.

Ashmodai
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what's the point of a fanfic in a specific universe if you don't give a shit about that universe. Just write your own universe. WTF. You are using it just to bait people. Come here people I write a Voldemort fanfic but it isn't actually Voldemort cause I don't give a shit about the actual facts I just use it as clickbait.

AlienWarlord:Its a fan-fiction. Dont take things to seriously and just enjoy it. Im not writing Voldemorts Biography. God, people just pick any minor thing to complain about, dont they.
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AlienWarlord
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Lol, your writing hate comments aboIt a characters eye color and name. Maybe its time you get off this app and spend some time outside. Get some perspective as to why you care so much about something so minor.

Ashmodai:what's the point of a fanfic in a specific universe if you don't give a shit about that universe. Just write your own universe. WTF. You are using it just to bait people. Come here people I write a Voldemort fanfic but it isn't actually Voldemort cause I don't give a shit about the actual facts I just use it as clickbait.
Ashmodai
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lol just another trash author that can't accept criticism and calls it hate comment. Good that I had the foresight to put this novel in my trash collection.

AlienWarlord:Lol, your writing hate comments aboIt a characters eye color and name. Maybe its time you get off this app and spend some time outside. Get some perspective as to why you care so much about something so minor.
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AlienWarlord
AlienWarlordAuthorAlienWarlord

Lol, K bye then

Ashmodai:lol just another trash author that can't accept criticism and calls it hate comment. Good that I had the foresight to put this novel in my trash collection.
Ashmodai
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bye AlienTrashCreator.

AlienWarlord:Lol, K bye then
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AlienWarlord
AlienWarlordAuthorAlienWarlord

Ashmodai:bye AlienTrashCreator.
MimicReads
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He actually did make his on universe by combing HP and MCU/XMEN

Ashmodai:what's the point of a fanfic in a specific universe if you don't give a shit about that universe. Just write your own universe. WTF. You are using it just to bait people. Come here people I write a Voldemort fanfic but it isn't actually Voldemort cause I don't give a shit about the actual facts I just use it as clickbait.
Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4Ashmodai

Voldemorts Name is still Tom not Thomas. And people aren't born with red eyes...

MimicReads:He actually did make his on universe by combing HP and MCU/XMEN
MimicReads
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people lacking melanin in their irises due to albinism, the blood vessels are visible enough to create a pink or red appearance.

Ashmodai:Voldemorts Name is still Tom not Thomas. And people aren't born with red eyes...
AlienWarlord
AlienWarlordAuthorAlienWarlord

My man

MimicReads:people lacking melanin in their irises due to albinism, the blood vessels are visible enough to create a pink or red appearance.
Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4Ashmodai

so you are telling me this Voldemort is pale and blond haired. Even greater bullshit.

MimicReads:people lacking melanin in their irises due to albinism, the blood vessels are visible enough to create a pink or red appearance.
MimicReads
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I dont remember saying that🤔 Isnt a fanfic? Who cares How they look

Ashmodai:so you are telling me this Voldemort is pale and blond haired. Even greater bullshit.
Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4Ashmodai

you said he has red eyes because of albanism... so he also has white/blond hair and pale skin. So stop bullshiting around. And yes describing appearance and keeping the world background right is important for the quality of a fanfic. I don't read bad ones like these. So I gave for the laziness of the author an appropriate review. I don't get what you want.

MimicReads:I dont remember saying that🤔 Isnt a fanfic? Who cares How they look
Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4Ashmodai

*albinism

Ashmodai:you said he has red eyes because of albanism... so he also has white/blond hair and pale skin. So stop bullshiting around. And yes describing appearance and keeping the world background right is important for the quality of a fanfic. I don't read bad ones like these. So I gave for the laziness of the author an appropriate review. I don't get what you want.
MimicReads
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Whats got you in a grumpy mood? If you dont like the story you could always Wrote one yoursef. Im so Mad becuase they changed the character, Boo Hoo go cry somewhere else

Ashmodai:you said he has red eyes because of albanism... so he also has white/blond hair and pale skin. So stop bullshiting around. And yes describing appearance and keeping the world background right is important for the quality of a fanfic. I don't read bad ones like these. So I gave for the laziness of the author an appropriate review. I don't get what you want.
Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4Ashmodai

oh I am writing a story myself and am currently publishing under another account. It's not my problem that you apparently can't accept criticism that has not even do anything with you. You seem to be very bored.

MimicReads:Whats got you in a grumpy mood? If you dont like the story you could always Wrote one yoursef. Im so Mad becuase they changed the character, Boo Hoo go cry somewhere else
MimicReads
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I am bored, Goodluck On your story

Ashmodai:oh I am writing a story myself and am currently publishing under another account. It's not my problem that you apparently can't accept criticism that has not even do anything with you. You seem to be very bored.
OkayRose
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Why would you write criticism if it isn'y constructive? Just making yourself look bad buddy

Ashmodai:oh I am writing a story myself and am currently publishing under another account. It's not my problem that you apparently can't accept criticism that has not even do anything with you. You seem to be very bored.
Ashmodai
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I did point out where the author made his mistakes... why are you blaming my review if the author doesn't give a shit about said mistakes. What is wrong with you?

OkayRose:Why would you write criticism if it isn'y constructive? Just making yourself look bad buddy