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Slap_king
Slap_kingLv43yr
2021-11-08 22:58

alright, I don't know if I already did a review or not, but now I'm feeling like doing it since I did read it a second time. this is a hidden gem, the written quality is lifelike, I found no hardship understanding the story, it is a simple one yet it's kind of complicated. the plot is kind of refreshing, it brings a change to the trash novels here. as for the characters, one word, simple. I can easily imagine the characters in my head. the world background, it kind of smooth, you see when the author describes something I always kind of see it in my head. recommend. 5/5 in everything it brings change to the word 'adventure', other novels that have the tag adventure do not understand the real meaning behind it. even the fillers are kind of enjoyable, you don't even notice that it's a filler. this review is made in a rush, excuse the grammar.

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1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1Author

Thank you! I am very glad to hear you can imagine things easily. that is a main goal I have in everything that I write. I hope that you continue to support my work in the future!

its_L
its_LLv3

author san is it harem?

1King_Rep1:Thank you! I am very glad to hear you can imagine things easily. that is a main goal I have in everything that I write. I hope that you continue to support my work in the future!
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

is it a harem ? I hate harem

1King_Rep1:Thank you! I am very glad to hear you can imagine things easily. that is a main goal I have in everything that I write. I hope that you continue to support my work in the future!
its_L
its_LLv3

author san second time asking is it harem or not?

1King_Rep1:Thank you! I am very glad to hear you can imagine things easily. that is a main goal I have in everything that I write. I hope that you continue to support my work in the future!
its_L
its_LLv3

is it harem bro?

Slap_king
Slap_kingLv4

I'm 90% sure ,there is no harem . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Bro.

its_L:is it harem bro?
its_L
its_LLv3

thnx now I can finally read this novel now that I know it's not harem

Slap_king:I'm 90% sure ,there is no harem . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Bro.
wodue
wodueLv3

i wanted to ask if there is any romance in yur 2 stories {what the luck} and his one? before i strt reading??

1King_Rep1:Thank you! I am very glad to hear you can imagine things easily. that is a main goal I have in everything that I write. I hope that you continue to support my work in the future!
its_L
its_LLv3

you need to have patience if you are not a Harem lover🙂

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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

Good response bro

its_L:you need to have patience if you are not a Harem lover🙂
KairenConan
KairenConanLv12

:) respect 📈📈

its_L:you need to have patience if you are not a Harem lover🙂
sevomond
sevomondLv15

no

its_L:author san is it harem?
Slap_king
Slap_kingLv4

that depends, you see this is an adventure/slice of life with the plot slowly being shown, it's like a story that makes you kick back and relax. Of course, it might not be your cup of tea, but I sincerely hope you can persist on it, but that is just my opinion, no worries if you don't like it there are other stories that you might like .

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Twilight_of_god
Twilight_of_godLv13

does MC goes to academy?

glacier_wave
glacier_waveLv3

Do you not read the tags?

its_L:thnx now I can finally read this novel now that I know it's not harem
SliverLance
SliverLanceLv4

hey bro, i would like to know if you have romance in your story. If so, did it start? and at which chapter.

1King_Rep1:Thank you! I am very glad to hear you can imagine things easily. that is a main goal I have in everything that I write. I hope that you continue to support my work in the future!
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