Item: Timeline System
Rating: 4.8

WorldEnderLv13yr

2020-12-11 08:31

Writing quality: Easy to read, no complicated vocabulary, you can dive in without much worry. Updates: On time Story development: I like the way the story it's headed, personally Character design: Only slight adjustments needed, more description of appearances World background: it may seem cliché as a post-apocalyptic but believe me it's different

Timeline System

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