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I like how the story progresses, the only thing missing is better handling of writing, quotes and position so that the reading is better, but if I liked how it started, it was not like others that I read (where it is the typical one of where it reincarnates or transmigrates into a body Random that is bullied at school and then has to endure abuse, while he strengthens, I like those stories but not so much because they are slow to advance, I prefer one like yours that does not have a weak-minded cowardly protagonist, yes not one yet who needs to do a schedule management for his girls, otherwise he will have problems). - I give it 5 stars since I know that it is difficult to write a story and more so publish it xD, I say it because I have seen several authors who publish and have errors a lot for being first-timers, where some toxic readers are giving 1 star and lying reviews that they have nothing to do with it, it only makes the author discouraged and does not want to write.

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BEAMPRODUCTION
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thanks alot.... you have given us motivation to push forward!

Yuri_is_Ntr
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I trust you judgment, comrade.

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I trust you, my comrade