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FlaiverLv41yr
2023-05-29 23:36

I don't know why all the reviews are 5 stars without details. Maybe it will get better further, but to be honest, after chapter 1 I don’t want to read further. The dialogue is weird and the plot is too forced. He just moved in and on the same day he was beaten, then cured and expelled from the family and even beaten. Could you choose a non-cliché start without a beating and revenge afterwards? A strange feeling from fanfic, I don’t know, I can read another chapter, but so far there is no desire.

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Solgalao
SolgalaoLv14

It gets better in the later chapters. The first few chapters aren’t my favorite and are simply demotivating to read.

ULLMANthe1APOSTLE
ULLMANthe1APOSTLELv2

Well i was also like you but after continuing to read every chapter i came to love this fanfic so do give it a try

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