Ok you little Sh*t till chapter 12 you screwed over timelines,there are various plot holes some:like when Boruto being an Uzumaki could only make 3 shadow clones at age 12 how the hell does Asuma the borderline side character makes 3 shadow clones at the age of 5,but I relented chalked it all up to it being AU but after chapter 12 you converted Naruto to FREAKING XIANXIA NOVEL I MEAN ARE YOU RIGHT IN YOUR HEAD OR ITS FULL OF DOG SH*T HUH!!!???
theTripleX_HSA
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LIKEHaochen:You know the guy just translates a story from Chinese to English and he doesn't write his own story, right?
watermelon_cookie:....... wow, you read it for free and now you're gonna do that, and even called sir translator little shit. Your parents must be very proud, or do you call them little shit as well? Drop if you hate =_= you're just killing someone's motiv by giving bad review.
watermelon_cookie:....... wow, you read it for free and now you're gonna do that, and even called sir translator little shit. Your parents must be very proud, or do you call them little shit as well? Drop if you hate =_= you're just killing someone's motiv by giving bad review.
and as for the bad review thing. man if you are not ready for criticism don't write anything there will always be criticism. that's what reviews are for
watermelon_cookie:....... wow, you read it for free and now you're gonna do that, and even called sir translator little shit. Your parents must be very proud, or do you call them little shit as well? Drop if you hate =_= you're just killing someone's motiv by giving bad review.