Friend, can you give me the name of the original, I already asked you for a long time, you can read this comment ......................... .....................

Link original.. Uukanshu please. [img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar]

Super long and awkward fight scenes. We don't need to know every spectator and their relatives reaction to every single attack or defence. Please get someone decent in English to edit this.

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This is the first time i had the desired of posting a low rate review... the reason being is that at some point in the story i feel that it destroy the original personality of the character and i feel it a slap again the creator of the original... it also mean that it should not be call a fanfic for if it become a cultivation novel and only replace the name so that it similar to the anime. as one of the fan of the series... i dont know if it intended to mess with the loyal fan of the series but the scrore reflect how i feel about this novel!

Nice story, I like it! 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　 　　　 　　　 　　　　　　 　　　　　　.

how is the name of the original....... ................ ....................... ........ ................................ ....................

I'm sorry, I couldn't even get passed half the first page, the translation is truly frustrating to read, there's a mistake in every other paragraph and it hurts my soul to have to take it mentally every time

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deleted my old review, early chapters have a really bad mtl quality, and later chapters have become bearable or i just got used to it??? deleted my old review, early chapters have a really bad mtl quality, and later chapters have become bearable or i just got used to it???