Review Detail of Hollysummoapocaly in Rebirth in Boku no Hero Academia
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A mc who did not want this world of violence, with a sad past history, tries to be strong enough to protect his family. I adore almost everything about his character. Alone, I don't understand why he expects things to get bad by going for him Waifus, does it feel like he wants an NTR, you spend 7 years with a girl but wait for him to get a boyfriend to go after him? It's the only thing in the novel that I found silly and annoying. for the others I give you 10 stars. (Translator)
Rebirth in Boku no Hero Academia
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I guess that was the part of illogical about MC. I created the Mc to be truly highly intelligent and overpowered. Creating him perfect only worsen the plot and brought a lot of cliche possibilities. I don't want to have an Mary sue protagonist because at the end of some novels or fanfiction, the more you read the more you get bored because you saw it coming. Im so sleepy that time when I wrote the part about Hitomi which is originally from H world. I don't have beta readers , editior to critique my small work.Im going to dropped this anyway my account is deleted in my phone and I complety forgotten the password.
Oh sorry on your own, I often forget passwords. And I get angry or frustrated this part of their relationship because it reminded me of me. I misinterpreted a childhood friend, when I was 13 years old that led us to separate, all because I was an idiot bad reader of feelings ... Uff
AmIEvil:I guess that was the part of illogical about MC. I created the Mc to be truly highly intelligent and overpowered. Creating him perfect only worsen the plot and brought a lot of cliche possibilities. I don't want to have an Mary sue protagonist because at the end of some novels or fanfiction, the more you read the more you get bored because you saw it coming. Im so sleepy that time when I wrote the part about Hitomi which is originally from H world. I don't have beta readers , editior to critique my small work.Im going to dropped this anyway my account is deleted in my phone and I complety forgotten the password.