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Aby_jsbbs56Lv23yr
2021-02-06 18:50

I've read up to chapter three, it is thought- provoking and riveting. Chapter one can hook anyone with the suspense. Good job, keep up the good work. ❤️❤️❤️

Tea house on Mount Tai

miu_hozuki
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199 Chs

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miu_hozuki
miu_hozukiAuthor

Thank you. Save for first chapter, paragraphs do not exist much in rest of the story... but I did forget first chapter could be the face of the story. Thanks for the reminder. I will take it in to consideration. ... Compacted paragraphs is my pet peeve after all!!!!

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Anphire
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First of all, prologue introduces world. Each chapter is long. Characters are pretty well thought out and make sense. Plot is good. No irrational actions, so far they just go with the flow/survive with close ones. Pretty good read, not action packed, but cool world/history and I enjoy reading how everything plays out. 😊

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A_Gitagon
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Wow, okay, this novel actually captivated me. It's going into my reading list for sure, Thumbs up and keep up the good work. I also just love that the title has Mt. Tai in it.

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enthu_reader
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A very interesting and captivating read 💕💖 Hooked right into the story and makes me wanting to read more~ Writing style is good with nice narration. Didn't find any grammar issues and have nice flow to the story ❤️❤️ I can see a lot of potential and looking forward to the plot development! Great work! All the best 💗

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A really well thought out novel. Well written and well executed. Really recommend people give this novel a oppurtunity.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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I've always loved fantasy books, and this one on webnovel suits me well, the world description is awesome and the story is brilliant, author has really done a good job

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Littlepunnie
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Hello! I've read the first three chapters of your book and I can tell that you really do have the potential of being a writer. I was looking up to more details, like narration and description to make me feel 'more' a lot engross about the story, Hmm, yeah, I feel like you lack description, but I love how you've described them accurately without further ados. Grammatical errors can be corrected so there is no need to be concerned about it too, much. Yes. The first chappy was good, but I was a little confused? Maybe it's because I'm sleepy or something. Anyways, I will give a new review after reading all the chapters. Happy Writing Author!

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yu_chan_desu
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amazingly written and the world created was so captivating and original! the author has done a good job at conveying the intircacies of palace life. kudos to the author! 💖💖💖

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I'm really loving the vibe I'm getting from this novel. :D Love how amazing the story was put together and how smoothly the events flow. I would definitely recommend reading this, amazing job XD

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If you didn't check this book, you gonna regret. Give it a go and you'll find it hard to put it away. Good work author. [img=update][img=update]

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