Review Detail of jayjayche990 in Red-Eyed. Devil.(Hiatus).

Item: Red-Eyed. Devil.(Hiatus).
Rating: 3.2

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jayjayche990Lv23yrjayjayche990

The story is interesting enough to garner a following, also the character development deserves praise. The drawbacks however make it difficult to continue reading following the story. The biggest problem is the poor grammar and spelling, rendering it difficult to comprehend entire paragraphs. I would at times spend time rereading a given sentence to imagine what the author is trying to say.

Red-Eyed. Devil.(Hiatus).

ClearSkySage

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ClearSkySageAuthorClearSkySage

Sadly I am bad at grammar even in my native language and English isn't my first language so I guess it's inevitable my grammar is going to be bad. Besides, I spent a lot of time reading on MTL so I guess that skewered my grammar even more.

3yr

jayjayche990Lv2jayjayche990

English is my third spoken language and I know the work it takes to learn a new language so keep writing and don't get discouraged. Lastly, maybe you can find an editor amongst one of your readers. Have a good day.

ClearSkySage:Sadly I am bad at grammar even in my native language and English isn't my first language so I guess it's inevitable my grammar is going to be bad. Besides, I spent a lot of time reading on MTL so I guess that skewered my grammar even more.

3yr