Review Detail of Alayashiki in STRONGEST HUMAN IN DxD - A REINCARNATION STORY
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Starmegalo:Thank you for your review... while there will be no harem (unless everyone wants it, then maybe I might add 1 or 2 OC or 'SERIOUSLY OOC' girls because girls in DxD is...) and there will be a serious romance with one specific girl, it will happen in the future because MC has lots of characteristic problems he has to solve. Even in his old life... he won't felt intense love because of Shinobu... you know. Pretty much hatred and anger were inside of her. He literally didnt develop his character from the day he births in this world... just copy of Yoriichi because he had his talents and... while doing that breathing, you won't be same like other people. So, just serious romance in future and until then a development while adventuring and sword and breathing... lots of sword thing. But that doesn't stop other girls to try. Which it's should be at some level otherwise it won't be DxD.
Thank you for your review... while there will be no harem (unless everyone wants it, then maybe I might add 1 or 2 OC or 'SERIOUSLY OOC' girls because girls in DxD is...) and there will be a serious romance with one specific girl, it will happen in the future because MC has lots of characteristic problems he has to solve. Even in his old life... he won't felt intense love because of Shinobu... you know. Pretty much hatred and anger were inside of her. He literally didnt develop his character from the day he births in this world... just copy of Yoriichi because he had his talents and... while doing that breathing, you won't be same like other people. So, just serious romance in future and until then a development while adventuring and sword and breathing... lots of sword thing. But that doesn't stop other girls to try. Which it's should be at some level otherwise it won't be DxD.
Starmegalo:Thank you for your review... while there will be no harem (unless everyone wants it, then maybe I might add 1 or 2 OC or 'SERIOUSLY OOC' girls because girls in DxD is...) and there will be a serious romance with one specific girl, it will happen in the future because MC has lots of characteristic problems he has to solve. Even in his old life... he won't felt intense love because of Shinobu... you know. Pretty much hatred and anger were inside of her. He literally didnt develop his character from the day he births in this world... just copy of Yoriichi because he had his talents and... while doing that breathing, you won't be same like other people. So, just serious romance in future and until then a development while adventuring and sword and breathing... lots of sword thing. But that doesn't stop other girls to try. Which it's should be at some level otherwise it won't be DxD.
Starmegalo:Thank you for your review... while there will be no harem (unless everyone wants it, then maybe I might add 1 or 2 OC or 'SERIOUSLY OOC' girls because girls in DxD is...) and there will be a serious romance with one specific girl, it will happen in the future because MC has lots of characteristic problems he has to solve. Even in his old life... he won't felt intense love because of Shinobu... you know. Pretty much hatred and anger were inside of her. He literally didnt develop his character from the day he births in this world... just copy of Yoriichi because he had his talents and... while doing that breathing, you won't be same like other people. So, just serious romance in future and until then a development while adventuring and sword and breathing... lots of sword thing. But that doesn't stop other girls to try. Which it's should be at some level otherwise it won't be DxD.
Eh even if they want i don't think it's a good idea to make a harem because most of them want wet dreams ;)
Starmegalo:Thank you for your review... while there will be no harem (unless everyone wants it, then maybe I might add 1 or 2 OC or 'SERIOUSLY OOC' girls because girls in DxD is...) and there will be a serious romance with one specific girl, it will happen in the future because MC has lots of characteristic problems he has to solve. Even in his old life... he won't felt intense love because of Shinobu... you know. Pretty much hatred and anger were inside of her. He literally didnt develop his character from the day he births in this world... just copy of Yoriichi because he had his talents and... while doing that breathing, you won't be same like other people. So, just serious romance in future and until then a development while adventuring and sword and breathing... lots of sword thing. But that doesn't stop other girls to try. Which it's should be at some level otherwise it won't be DxD.
You're right. But to me, the harem is not even a relationship... Multiple girls interact with MC is harem to me. Then give the ending to a true girl. Why some harem endings even exist, I don't get the reason for %80 of them. Not thinking about the plot but theorizing the ship... Even some authors chose the girls they like... The future of the community is dark... I would add to tag harem for that(My definition of the harem) but it was too dangerous. I might be scared because if they start wanting MC with empty side characters or characters from canon which didn't even appear yet. Why everyone shipping a character they don't even know? it's different in every fanfiction after all...
CristiaN:Eh even if they want i don't think it's a good idea to make a harem because most of them want wet dreams ;)
if you make an ending with a single girl but multiple girls like mc and you put the harem tag I think you will make most harem lovers angry ;) P.S Sorry for my english, It's my second language
Starmegalo:You're right. But to me, the harem is not even a relationship... Multiple girls interact with MC is harem to me. Then give the ending to a true girl. Why some harem endings even exist, I don't get the reason for %80 of them. Not thinking about the plot but theorizing the ship... Even some authors chose the girls they like... The future of the community is dark... I would add to tag harem for that(My definition of the harem) but it was too dangerous. I might be scared because if they start wanting MC with empty side characters or characters from canon which didn't even appear yet. Why everyone shipping a character they don't even know? it's different in every fanfiction after all...
English is my second language too. But funny side, original novels also does this... harem story but one girl.
CristiaN:if you make an ending with a single girl but multiple girls like mc and you put the harem tag I think you will make most harem lovers angry ;) P.S Sorry for my english, It's my second language
well... polygamy is the actual definition because it's more innocent and the harem is not... So they are kinda right when they used the harem tag for that, harem for anime different that harem. Harem is an anime where MC has, Baka! , tsundere, etc moments. I mean really...? why not just make a 'Polygamy possible' tag if not want to spoil, if it's okay then just 'Polygamy'. But it's not like you are wrong, if you came for 1 man and multiple girls and it's come out solo, it might break your ships and expectations. That's all my opinion tho.
JaimeX07:definitions have change with time, I hate when harem tag is use when only one girl is chosen
Translated spanish to inglish Personal opinion -As one more reader I think it would feel strange (unnatural) that your Mc only has a girlfriend especially in the world you sent him to (DxD) .... When you want to or not the author Ichiei Ishibumi created the worldview of DxD that exhibitionism and the harem are relatively common, so later you may have complications in the development of the novel (haters or with the development itself). In my opinion I think it would be acceptable if your Mc has 2-3 love interests at most so you have the freedom to have the girls interact with the Mc and have their own backstory of how they develop and show their own worth and valid reasons. in which they would end up in a relationship with Mc and they don't end up being simple "trophies" as happens in many DxD fanfiction.
Starmegalo:well... polygamy is the actual definition because it's more innocent and the harem is not... So they are kinda right when they used the harem tag for that, harem for anime different that harem. Harem is an anime where MC has, Baka! , tsundere, etc moments. I mean really...? why not just make a 'Polygamy possible' tag if not want to spoil, if it's okay then just 'Polygamy'. But it's not like you are wrong, if you came for 1 man and multiple girls and it's come out solo, it might break your ships and expectations. That's all my opinion tho.
Hmm... Possible, I consider this in the future. But like I said, even if he ended up with one girl it's not like I can't write ecchi and hentai scenes with others before their relationship is formed. It's hard to explain without telling what kind of girl I am going to write but that's it, she is not the kind of person to stop MC those girls.
1Dreamer_Owl:Translated spanish to inglish Personal opinion -As one more reader I think it would feel strange (unnatural) that your Mc only has a girlfriend especially in the world you sent him to (DxD) .... When you want to or not the author Ichiei Ishibumi created the worldview of DxD that exhibitionism and the harem are relatively common, so later you may have complications in the development of the novel (haters or with the development itself). In my opinion I think it would be acceptable if your Mc has 2-3 love interests at most so you have the freedom to have the girls interact with the Mc and have their own backstory of how they develop and show their own worth and valid reasons. in which they would end up in a relationship with Mc and they don't end up being simple "trophies" as happens in many DxD fanfiction.
Well, if there's a harem tag then I won't even consider such a piece of writing as a proper story and I won't waste my time reading it.
CristiaN:if you make an ending with a single girl but multiple girls like mc and you put the harem tag I think you will make most harem lovers angry ;) P.S Sorry for my english, It's my second language
Well, if you just put yourself in a normal girl's mindset, you'll realize that a harem in itself is terrible. Just imagine the jealousy and war for attention? I don't realize how people actually want such a thing.
Starmegalo:Hmm... Possible, I consider this in the future. But like I said, even if he ended up with one girl it's not like I can't write ecchi and hentai scenes with others before their relationship is formed. It's hard to explain without telling what kind of girl I am going to write but that's it, she is not the kind of person to stop MC those girls.
Tsumihoshi:Well, if there's a harem tag then I won't even consider such a piece of writing as a proper story and I won't waste my time reading it.
You're damn right.. But sometimes I am thinking it's possible... rarely but in some novels MC is true alfa and...you know can take care of the girls etc. But in real life it is impossible to be THAT Alpha
Tsumihoshi:Well, if you just put yourself in a normal girl's mindset, you'll realize that a harem in itself is terrible. Just imagine the jealousy and war for attention? I don't realize how people actually want such a thing.
Yeah, some novels do have mc's that just have that kinda aura. I guess it is charming, yeah. Thus, some harems just DEVELOP NATURALLY and there's nothing strange about those. I still don't like reading them too much, but they are acceptable.
Starmegalo:You're damn right.. But sometimes I am thinking it's possible... rarely but in some novels MC is true alfa and...you know can take care of the girls etc. But in real life it is impossible to be THAT Alpha
I dont see why so many people want harems. Usually they become 2d side characters that are basically just bodies and oversimplified personalities. I've only seen one story do it well.
Starmegalo:You're right. But to me, the harem is not even a relationship... Multiple girls interact with MC is harem to me. Then give the ending to a true girl. Why some harem endings even exist, I don't get the reason for %80 of them. Not thinking about the plot but theorizing the ship... Even some authors chose the girls they like... The future of the community is dark... I would add to tag harem for that(My definition of the harem) but it was too dangerous. I might be scared because if they start wanting MC with empty side characters or characters from canon which didn't even appear yet. Why everyone shipping a character they don't even know? it's different in every fanfiction after all...