Review Detail of Brett_Knox in A quick tale

Hello, Author here. just wanna say this is a pretty good novel. I'm not on the same level as alot of the authors on here but I feel as if this is a pretty good concept for a si and wanted to write it and I hope you enjoy it too. I like suggestions to give a more interactive feel to the novel so please drop a comment if you have a critique or cool ability you want the mc to gain or work towards. Have a great day and remember to drink ajough water.