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Stereotypical
StereotypicalLv34yr
2020-12-14 01:08

An honestly great novel the author is aware of the mistakes they make and is willing to get better. the character doesnt completely change due to getting a system and Instead seems to be growing over time. Just a generaly great book

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Romeru
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Hello, poor author here. I would just like to point out the things to expect from this book: The Good: 1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom. 2. I am your friend. The Bad: 1. Expect me to make grammar mistakes. I mostly mix up my gender pronouns since they don't exist in my language. 2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow. 3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together. 4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together. 5. Damaged MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC is a survivor of child abuse, so do expect some moments of weakness and irrationality. Just hints and pieces. 6. Character first, System second - Although this is a System book, I tend to focus more on the characters. 7. Inconsitencies - It's a book about a speedster, so there might be inconsistencies here and there. But I will try my best to avoid it. Here's what to do before reading this book: 1. Play some music. 2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first. 3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when someone can breathe fire from their nose. 4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw. Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)

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Nyth
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So, just finished reading till chapter 50, I will update this when there is more chapters and I actually read them. This is my opinion, if you think otherwise about anything I wrote here just share it, it’s always nice to hear other opinions. First of all, I read the first couple chapters a while back. Till the fifth or seventh chapter I didn’t really liked the start and yesterday I was a bit bored and decided to continue and see if this is any good (that was a good decision lol). I read a couple more chapters till 12-14 and I was starting to get into it, a couple more chapters and I was totally into it. I spent all my time reading this today and I regret none of it. Once you get over the first ~10 chapters it really gets better, the pace is not too slow or too fast, the only problems would be that the chapters are a bit short and that you don’t exactly know how strong the main character actually is. Although I really liked the story and the characters, I was always a bit lost thinking “Is he stronger than him/her?”. It would be a lot better if we knew with some sort of rank or power scale(?) how strong people are. These are the only reasons why I removed 1 star in character design and world background. (I can’t say that I was a bit reluctant about removing a star from the world background, but can’t be helped) :/ I don’t know if the scale I’m talking about is actually planned or not but I would definitely love to see it and be aware if it’s a right choice from the main character to fight/run in his future encounters. Overall I think it is really good, can’t wait for more chapters!

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