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Honest review. 4 for writing quality because although the story is good there's obvious mistakes in pronouncing and sentence flows. 5 for stability because I got here about an hour ago and don't know the timing at the moment. 5 for story development because the story sort of flows. 2 for Character Design, I'm gonna be talking about this because this is the main problem for stories so here is my opinion. The MC is an idiot, he's always going back and forth in his thinking and doesn't stick to the things that are important, he's constantly overlooked things that may have saved his life for things that other protagonists have, his reactions are ok but it's hard to find anything good about them when his brain is racing and we're stuck wondering if he's gonna do what most people would do. I feel like the author is trying to guide him to be like all the other isekai protagonists where he gets picked up by ladies and has all these op skills that one day saves the world... I'm not into all the cliche isekai stories and I know you want something good but please don't go down the obvious route of them being suddenly able to turn into a human and have adventures with people, I've seen that too many times and it gets annoying when the mc just ditches what was unique to them just to be a human again. I haven't read many pheonix stories and I want this to be a good one but he's getting all of the cliche skills and forsaking his race in the pursuit of living a normal life. the story does great otherwise with all the building and such but the mc just compares himself to other isekai's and it's getting annoying. The only reason I still call Her a He is because he was born a man had male tendencies and when he was reborn still wanted to have a girlfriend, I'm not gonna deny it just cause of that but when you even still act like a man and try to get a girlfriend with all those added up and him seemingly not taking the reincarnation as a new life I feel it's more stacked to him as a man than a female, even with that he still was shocked when he found out he was female. 4 for world background because it does good to give a view of the world but -1 star for not really exploring everything and giving us a full info on the world type.

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I Reincarnated As A Glacial Pheonix

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