Item: Pansy Parkinson - doing it right this time -
Rating: 4.4
Author: Lime_Juice

Lime_JuiceLv43yr

2021-02-08 08:49

I like female mcs because they arent usually harem mcs which in not a huge fan of. The character pansy is one of my like favorite non main character and I love what your doing. Please make more so I can enjoy this >-<. I like butterfly effect but too drastic of changes from super out of the way choices is 2 much 4 me. idk if I read it all correctly might of got confused but I still love it so ye u=u. I hope this character stays in the realm of possibility with her own flaws and not a perfect being. Your doing a great job and whatever you do with this story I'll read along. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]. (following main story or like own adventure or both?)

Pansy Parkinson - doing it right this time -

Timis

4.4

72 Chs

Liked by 37 people

Replies2

TimisAuthor

Aweeee thank you for the amazing feedback, now it seems a little rushed and a bit confusing but the butterfly effect will be explored more in detail but I just got to get to that part :) I am happy you like it so much ughh I love uuu sm rn :))

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