An interesting view in a retelling of King Arthur. Though a little sarcasm and black comedy here and there, the initian is superb. A gratitude from me to you, this is actually quite comedic. Writing quality is as follows a good one. Volume, detail and also tenses are better and more responsive here. Stability of updates is decent as well, better than the other stories. Character design wise a little here and there of flaws but pretty good in my opinion. The MC is literally King Arthur but with a twist. A more child-like and rather silly personality than its original archetype. World background has a little bit of a problem but slowly gets to the point, though a little lagging behind. Pretty good effort and also a slow increase in detailling is nice. An honest opinion, keep up the good work Author!
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