Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Rise of King Arthur

The story flowed nicely. I know the author was not a native english speaker but he was doing extremely well despite his obstacles. I have seen few typos but the author can edit it! So far the story has a good detailed narration, story to tell, and a creative story. It was what was important so good luck author! You will improve later on as the time goes by and I know it! Have a good day and write more!