interesting idea for a system. I first was interested by reading the synopsis (I eman, what's a lust king system XD) but I have to say, I quite like the novel. The Mc makes me feel bad for him, and the system is quite well made. What I might suggest is adding some originality in the worldbuiling, like a new kind of race or smth
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