Review Detail of amaturewriter in Thor: The God of Thunder

Finally. THOR. dope. I like The RKT. I like a thor centric FF. so its dope. The chps are dope, long and well written...and so is story, so far. And its a few centuries? or more before cannon so thats dope. And it seems to be leaning more towards comic verse so thats cool. excited to see all the stupid shit Marvel comics has. Only 2 chps and the personalities suit em well. lokis personality is captured well in the story. I like that. a cunt but some semblance of care for thor. As for thor, its suits him well. I get thors charm is his brashness/ [ depends ]selflessness and ' stupidity? ', but him being intelligent would be dope, and more darker? less heroic is what I am trying to say. I also the idea of him learning magic. interested to see what you do. Would request that you explain ur working of the magic and power if possible, cause I dont know much about it. Also if relationships, just build it. dont force it. just request that it be happy and no sad shit, NTR, netori or some shit like that. if it there, heads up would be appreciated. Cyttorak, kree [ and the other tech civilizations ], dormamu, skyfathers and their pantheon's, The Klyntar [ really request em ], even O.A.A... interactions with em would be interesting. [ most of the gods were cunts....if you can...fk em up or something. most of em just horrible people.......plus they ignored in ff's and no one ever fights em..] overall 2 chps in and its dope. GL and love this shit .