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2021-08-31 09:24

I did not get to read the original version of this before he decided to rewrite. But reguardless this is a solid fan-fic i greatly enjoy it especially since it has a unique mc as well as how he implements the mc into the world. Finally i have read up to the most recent chapter as of now (4th) and see great potential in this fanfic and look forward to where the author takes it.

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