Review Detail of HANA_4345 in The Hacker Girl

The story looks promising. But as most reviewers have already written. The grammar part is a big turnoff. I recommend you use Grammarly when you are writing your chapters. It is not 100% accurate, but it corrects at least 90% of your mistakes. Another option in case you are writing on your cellphone will be writing the chapter in word, so their autocorrect can mark your mistakes. Then, you pass it on WN. The story is pretty nice though, as I said at the beginning it looks promising. Have fun writing!