Review Detail of Ozymandias007i in The Hacker Girl

I think your command of English is very good. Even though there are some grammatical and errors here and there I still get the sense of what you're trying to say which is good. Keep on working and reading English novels from native speakers and your English will be on par with them if not better. Your world and story is interesting. It's well paced which is good and it's been engaging this far. Keep on working. There's definitely some potential in this story.