Review Detail of Odyosis in Travel in search of pleasure and fun.

Item: Travel in search of pleasure and fun.
Rating: 3

Review detail

OdyosisAuthor3yrOdyosis

here the author, only 3 stars, because being honest, I have spelling mistakes, it is a fanfic that I only do for fun, not everyone will like it, those who do not like me, I hope they can find one of their liking, and those who read on, I hope you continue to like it. Sometimes I don't explain very well, time jumps may not be well explained, but I think I improve each chapter. And thanks to all who gave constructive criticism, help to improve as an author. some people may be confused with the dialogues, I will also try to fix that.

Travel in search of pleasure and fun.

Odyosis

Liked by 39 people

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Sneeky_JakeLv10Sneeky_Jake

respect to author for giving an objective review of his work instead of 5stars and telling people not to review poorly because of stated reasons like 99% of junk on here

1yr

WONDAWAELv14WONDAWAE

HAVE YOU TRIED USING GRAMMARLY?

3yr

iTrideLv5iTride

Hi! Is this a harem or not?

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3yr

OdyosisAuthorOdyosis

Si, sale colo tag.

iTride:Hi! Is this a harem or not?

3yr

Paradox_Lv4Paradox_

Use the free version of Grammarly, it doesn’t catch every error but 95% of them.

3yr

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iTride:Hi! Is this a harem or not?

3yr

Jackson_Alucard611Lv14Jackson_Alucard611

is the mc evil or neutral

Odyosis:Si, sale colo tag.

2yr

Chaos_Order8Lv4Chaos_Order8

Just asking why didn't u add The heroine of OreGairu into the Harem of the mc?

1yr

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World Re Zero?

1yr