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Lustsifer
LustsiferLv143yr
2021-04-24 22:51

As I read this to chapter 9 I can make a conclusion that this one is actually good story-wise, what make this bad is the grammar and spelling mistakes. The story is about a young man that got reincarnated to a parallel world of Earth without superpowers. He got Diablo 2 system that can transport him to Diablo 2 world and LoL system that able to summon items and characters from LoL. Additionally, he can go to another world other than Diablo 2.

Travel in search of pleasure and fun.

Odyosis
4.2
40 Chs

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Manuel_Fritsch
Manuel_FritschLv15

so his system is something thats used in that one novel(forgot the name,its called something with King in it) ?

3yr
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The_Heaven
The_HeavenLv2

Hail The King.

Manuel_Fritsch:so his system is something thats used in that one novel(forgot the name,its called something with King in it) ?
3yr
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Odyosis
OdyosisAuthor

here the author, only 3 stars, because being honest, I have spelling mistakes, it is a fanfic that I only do for fun, not everyone will like it, those who do not like me, I hope they can find one of their liking, and those who read on, I hope you continue to like it. Sometimes I don't explain very well, time jumps may not be well explained, but I think I improve each chapter. And thanks to all who gave constructive criticism, help to improve as an author. some people may be confused with the dialogues, I will also try to fix that.

4yr

BuckRodgers
BuckRodgersLv14

A decent book held back by writer and translator errors compounding to make an unfun reading experience. Im also probably being very forgiving because both diablo 2 and Necromancer are my jam and dont get enough fanfictions.

4yr
Psan
PsanLv6

I will give it a chance since i like diablo and lol. But this has grammar issues. But one thing thst its extremely bad for a novel. Is the complete lack of a proper synopsis or summary. Instead we are presened with. "I dont know english" and literslly nothing more. Aside that this has diablo and lol elements. We have absolutely no idea what is this about. And as a reader. I feel insulted. Who would wsnt to even read this? Much less offer support.

4yr
ruhe
ruheLv6

Man he really needs a editor and fix every chapter from the start. the concept of the novel is interesting but if you can’t read or don’t understand what you read it kills the joy

4yr
AbsoluteLoli_Lover
AbsoluteLoli_LoverLv4

Me encanta tu historia pero siguen liando se los parrafos [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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kevin_saputra
kevin_saputraLv3

interesting story, I've read up to the latest chapter and I like it until now. I hope the author keeps updating every day and don't drop this story.

4yr
NotPro
NotProLv15

Overall good novel if you like the tags, i just can not read it because it confuses pronouns. The mc is fking someone and calling her a him, poor grammer makes me stop reading.

3yr
PervertedPasserby
PervertedPasserbyLv10

the story is interesting, the problem is the grammar and the interaction between characters, it's very confusing like shit, you need to reread to really understand

4yr
Champion_collector
Champion_collectorLv14

The Grammer is bad but the overall story and everything else is fine Author no disrespect but please fix the grammer It gets confuzing on who you are referring to

3yr
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